memoria: update kana massage

Missions/side02/201004212_translations_eng.json

@@ -1,30 +1,30 @@
 {
-	"201004212_0": "Well then...I feel like my body melted when I took that shower.",
+	"201004212_0": "Alright...I felt my body unravel while I took that shower.",
 	"201004212_1": "Commence stretching!",
 	"201004212_2": "Hm-hmm-hmm♪...Hm? What're you two up to?",
-	"201004212_3": "Exactly what it looks like. We're stretching",
+	"201004212_3": "Exactly what it looks like. We're stretching.",
 	"201004212_4": "Fighting Alca-Noise is pretty tiring. If you don't stretch your muscles properly...",
 	"201004212_5": "Mind putting some pressure on my back?",
 	"201004212_6": "Okay...",
 	"201004212_7": "Ow ow ow...Alright, I'll do yours next.",
 	"201004212_8": "That would be great.",
-	"201004212_9": "By the way, that under-arm stretch I was taught oughta be pretty effective.....",
+	"201004212_9": "By the way, that under-arm stretch I was taught oughta be pretty effective...",
 	"201004212_10": "I'd like for you to teach me that...",
 	"201004212_11": "Sure, I will when we're done.",
-	"201004212_12": "...Uhyaa~, you two sure are serious.",
+	"201004212_12": "...Uhyaa, you two sure are serious.",
 	"201004212_13": "You shouldn't just be standing there admiring. If you don't get to stretching as well, your muscles are gonna get all achy.",
-	"201004212_14": "I agree, Kiri-chan.",
+	"201004212_14": "I agree, Kiri.",
 	"201004212_15": "Hehehe! I'm totally fine without stretching!",
 	"201004212_16": "Huh? Where's this self-confidence coming from?",
 	"201004212_17": "It's all because... <size=40>I'm so young!</size>",
 	"201004212_18": "...",
 	"201004212_19": "...",
 	"201004212_20": "Kiri...We're the same age.",
-	"201004212_21": "Weeeellll, even though we're born in the same year",
-	"201004212_22": "...What the hell are you talking about? Between you and me, we're only a year apart!",
-	"201004212_23": "Sure, but~. For now, I don't need any of that!",
+	"201004212_21": "Weeeellll, even though we're born in the same year—",
+	"201004212_22": "What the hell are you talking about? Between you and me, we're only a year apart!",
+	"201004212_23": "Sure, but, for now, I don't need any of that!",
 	"201004212_24": "Ah, Kiri...!",
 	"201004212_25": "Oh, that little...",
 	"201004212_26": "She's not stretching... that's not a good habit to have.",
-	"201004212_27": "...Yeah."
+	"201004212_27": "Yeah."
 }

Missions/side02/201004221_translations_eng.json

@@ -7,14 +7,14 @@
 	"201004221_5": "Yep!",
 	"201004221_6": "Okay then, let's hurry up and—",
 	"201004221_7": "Hey, old man, mind if I get a question in?",
-	"201004221_8": "Ah, what is it?",
+	"201004221_8": "Yeah, what is it?",
 	"201004221_9": "Can you change how tough these virtual Alca-Noise will be?",
-	"201004221_10": "Naturally. We've prepared up to ten levels. Today, you'll be starting at the first level.",
+	"201004221_10": "Of course. We've prepared up to ten levels. Today, you'll be starting at the first level.",
 	"201004221_11": "If that's the case, start Kiri off at level five.",
 	"201004221_12": "What?!",
 	"201004221_13": "Yeah, she was bragging about how she's so much younger than us a few days ago. We'd definitely love to see that youth gap in action, right?",
-	"201004221_14": "Ohh, Kirika got that fighting spirit......",
-	"201004221_15": "...Very well, if that's the case, let's start Kirika off at level five. It'll be plenty intense, but persevere with that youth of yours!",
+	"201004221_14": "Ohh, Kirika's got some fighting spirit, today...",
+	"201004221_15": "Very well, if that's the case, let's start Kirika off at level five. It'll be plenty intense, but persevere with that youth of yours!",
 	"201004221_16": "Wh—whaaaaat?!",
 	"201004221_17": "...*grin*"
 }

Missions/side02/201004222_translations_eng.json

@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 {
 	"201004222_0": "Guoaaaa!",
 	"201004222_1": "Th—this...hurts so bad...every step I take, it's like lightning running through my body...",
-	"201004222_2": "It's because of that...ridiculous training yesterday...I'm feeling it in every muscle......",
-	"201004222_3": "I can't show myself to Shirabe or Chris like this......",
+	"201004222_2": "It's because of that...ridiculous training yesterday...I'm feeling it in every muscle...",
+	"201004222_3": "I can't show myself to Shirabe or Chris like this...",
 	"201004222_4": "Haguo?! Destroy!!",
 	"201004222_5": "Th-that's it...at a time like this, if I take a shower...it might warm my body up!",
-	"201004222_6": "Uuu...Just heating up my body isn't enough....",
+	"201004222_6": "Uuu...Just heating up my body isn't enough...",
 	"201004222_7": "Whoops!",
 	"201004222_8": "Ah...?! S, sor—",
 	"201004222_9": "Ngya?!",
@@ -15,15 +15,15 @@
 	"201004222_13": "Thanks to these cruel circumstances...",
 	"201004222_14": "Haha, I got it. Your muscles all aching?",
 	"201004222_15": "If that's the case, how about I give you a massage?",
-	"201004222_16": "E...Nah, I'd feel guilty about that—",
+	"201004222_16": "Uh...Nah, I'd feel guilty about that—",
 	"201004222_17": "Might not seem like it, but I give a mean massage. It's a battle of body strength, you see.",
 	"201004222_18": "There won't be any stiffness left once I loosen up your muscles with a thorough grinding!",
-	"201004222_19": "G, grinding...did a death flag already go up?!",
+	"201004222_19": "G-grinding...did a death flag already go up?!",
 	"201004222_20": "Alright, if it's decided, here I go...",
 	"201004222_21": "No, I'm totally oka...a, aaaaa~?!",
 	"201004222_22": "'Kay, let's start off with....your thighs...",
 	"201004222_23": "..., n, gyaa—?!",
-	"201004222_24": "Hey, you can't be squirming while you're stretching. If we don't stretch on the inside right, too......",
+	"201004222_24": "Hey, you can't be squirming while you're stretching. If we don't stretch on the inside right, too...",
 	"201004222_25": "Here, just reach out and bend a little more—",
 	"201004222_26": "Nuoooo?!",
 	"201004222_27": "Ah, that's no good. When you're stretching, you've gotta take nice, deep breaths.",
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 	"201004222_35": "Gyaaa?!",
 	"201004222_36": "Look, one, two, one, two...just turn over, nice and easy~",
 	"201004222_37": "Too much, too much, TOO MUCH, TOO MUCH!",
-	"201004222_38": "...with that, she probably understands how important it is to stretch out your body.",
+	"201004222_38": "With that, she probably understands how important it is to stretch out your body.",
 	"201004222_39": "Kiri, this is all for your sake.",
 	"201004222_40": "DEEEEE......ATH!!",
 	"201004222_41": "...pfft, ehehehe.",