memoria: that dress one: edited

Missions/2010107/201010711_translations_eng.json

@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
 	"201010711_2": "Which one?",
 	"201010711_3": "Wow... it's beautiful.",
 	"201010711_4": "Don't you think it'd look amazing on you, Maria?",
-	"201010711_5": "Yeah, I think it would. But that might be more due to the fact that she'd look good in any dress.",
+	"201010711_5": "Yeah, I think it would. \\n But that might be due more to the fact that she'd look good in any dress.",
 	"201010711_6": "You're right.",
-	"201010711_7": "I wish I could pull one of like she does...",
+	"201010711_7": "I wish I could pull off a dress like she can...",
 	"201010711_8": "It's only a matter of time.",
 	"201010711_9": "That's right, you're sisters after all!",
 	"201010711_10": "Huh? R-Really...?",
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@
 	"201010711_12": "So for now you should just enjoy wearing the clothes that already suit you.",
 	"201010711_13": "The clothes that already suit me?",
 	"201010711_14": "Yes. There's clothes that suit you <i>because</i> you are who you are.",
-	"201010711_15": "Plus, refining yourself so that you can wear what you eventually want to is part of the fun too.",
+	"201010711_15": "Plus, refining yourself so that you can eventually wear what you want to is part of the fun too.",
 	"201010711_16": "I'm going to do my best to make myself worthy of such a wonderful dress!",
-	"201010711_17": "And when I do, you'll be the first person I show it too!",
+	"201010711_17": "And when I do, you'll be the first person I show it to!",
 	"201010711_18": "That sounds wonderful, Serena. \\n I can't wait.",
-	"201010711_19": "I definitely understand wanting to wear such a beautiful dress.",
+	"201010711_19": "I can definitely understand wanting to wear such a beautiful dress.",
 	"201010711_20": "I think the one next to it would look great on you.",
 	"201010711_21": "Huh? D-Do you think so?",
 	"201010711_22": "It might be a bit mature, but with a bit of makeup you'd look beautiful in it.",
@@ -26,15 +26,15 @@
 	"201010711_24": "If I saw you wearing that dress, I wouldn't be able to keep my eyes off you!",
 	"201010711_25": "Hibiki... You're making me blush...",
 	"201010711_26": "But there's no way we'd ever be able to afford a designer dress like that...",
-	"201010711_27": "It takes a lot of money to stay in-fashion as an adult...",
+	"201010711_27": "It costs a lot of money to stay in-fashion as an adult...",
 	"201010711_28": "From S.O.N.G.?!",
 	"201010711_29": "Seems like an emergency...",
 	"201010711_30": "This is Hibiki.",
 	"201010711_31": "Sorry for interrupting your day off. \\n There's some trouble at sector A5.",
-	"201010711_32": "I don't think it'll be a problem, but we have to prepare for the worst. We want all of the Adaptors on standby at S.O.N.G..",
+	"201010711_32": "I don't think it'll be a problem, but we have to prepare for the worst. \\n We want all of the Adaptors on standby at S.O.N.G..",
 	"201010711_33": "Judging from the GPS data, Maria should be with you.",
 	"201010711_34": "Yes, I can hear you.",
-	"201010711_35": "Then I ask that the two of you meet us at S.O.N.G.",
+	"201010711_35": "Then I ask that the two of you meet us at S.O.N.G..",
 	"201010711_36": "Understood!",
 	"201010711_37": "Let's go.",
 	"201010711_38": "Sorry, Miku...",
@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@
 	"201010711_41": "I'm fine, don't worry about me. \\n Please be careful.",
 	"201010711_42": "Thanks. \\n Let's go.",
 	"201010711_43": "We'll contact you once we know more.",
-	"201010711_44": "Please take care of Hibiki. \\n And Hibiki, you're not allowed to overdo it!",
-	"201010711_45": "I know!",
+	"201010711_44": "Please take care of Hibiki. \\n And Hibiki, you're not allowed to do anything stupid!",
+	"201010711_45": "I know already!",
 	"201010711_46": "You can just respond the same as you always do...",
 	"201010711_47": "And they're gone...",
 	"201010711_48": "Now what should we do?",
@@ -54,13 +54,13 @@
 	"201010711_52": "Let's go!",
 	"201010711_53": "Wow, there's so many shops... \\n And even more people!",
 	"201010711_54": "At flea markets, normal people come together and sell all sorts of things.",
-	"201010711_55": "There's lots of handmade goods and other deals you wouldn't be able to find at a normal store.",
+	"201010711_55": "There's lots of handmade goods and other deals \\n you wouldn't be able to find at a normal store.",
 	"201010711_56": "That explains all the energy!",
 	"201010711_57": "Want to hold hands so you don't get lost?",
 	"201010711_58": "Sure!",
-	"201010711_59": "Hehe,",
+	"201010711_59": "Hehe, now I feel a hundred percent safe!",
 	"201010711_60": "Oh, there's some beautiful western clothes over there!",
-	"201010711_61": "I see, let's go check them out!",
+	"201010711_61": "I saw, let's go check them out!",
 	"201010711_62": "Is this a tailor's stand?",
 	"201010711_63": "Everything seems so expensive... \\n Less like a flea market and more like a boutique.",
 	"201010711_64": "Look, they have dresses too!",
@@ -68,11 +68,11 @@
 	"201010711_66": "Hello. I have a lot of confidence in these, so feel free to check them out.",
 	"201010711_67": "You do? So you made all of this?",
 	"201010711_68": "Yep. I'm still only a student, but I'm aiming to become a professional designer.",
-	"201010711_69": "I say I have confidence, but I'm still an amateur. You're one of the few people to stop here so far...",
+	"201010711_69": "I say I have confidence, but I'm still an amateur. \\n You're some of the few people to stop by so far...",
 	"201010711_70": "I can't believe that... \\n Everything's so beautiful.",
-	"201010711_71": "That's right. I think these have a charm that could even stand up to a designer brand.",
+	"201010711_71": "That's right. \\n I think these have a charm that could even stand up to a designer brand.",
 	"201010711_72": "I'm glad to hear you say that.",
-	"201010711_73": "Just let me know if there's anything specific that catches your eye. I'll even give you a discount!",
+	"201010711_73": "Just let me know if there's anything specific that catches your eye. \\n I'll even give you a discount!",
 	"201010711_74": "No, we don't need anything like that...",
 	"201010711_75": "It's fine. \\n I think this would look good on you, what do you think?",
 	"201010711_76": "Wow, it's so cute!",
@@ -95,19 +95,19 @@
 	"201010711_93": "Yep! Okay, on the count of three, we'll show eachother.",
 	"201010711_94": "Got it.",
 	"201010711_95": "Okay then...",
-	"201010711_96": "One... Two.. Three!",
+	"201010711_96": "One... Two... Three!",
 	"201010711_97": "Wow... That dress looks beautiful on you!",
-	"201010711_98": "And yours looks great on you! \\n You're so cute it's almost like you're a doll!",
-	"201010711_99": "I'm happy to hear that! \\n Do you think Maria will say the same...?",
+	"201010711_98": "And yours looks great on you! \\n You're so cute, it's almost like you're a doll!",
+	"201010711_99": "I'm happy to hear that! \\n Do you think Maria will agree...?",
 	"201010711_100": "Absolutely. And she'll mean it from the bottom of her heart.",
-	"201010711_101": "Thanks. \\n And I think you're going to have to be careful around Tachibana.",
-	"201010711_102": "Hehe, I wonder what would happen if I'm not?",
+	"201010711_101": "Thanks. And I'm sure Tachibana is going to sweep you off your feet as soon as she sees you.",
+	"201010711_102": "Oh, what ever would I do?",
 	"201010711_103": "I got a text from Hibiki... \\n She said they're coming home soon.",
 	"201010711_104": "So they're okay. Thank goodness.",
 	"201010711_105": "I replied saying we're in Maria's room, so...",
-	"201010711_106": "I understand what you're trying to say. \\n You want to wait like this until they get back, right?",
+	"201010711_106": "I know what you're thinking. \\n We should wait like this until they get back, right?",
 	"201010711_107": "We might as well. How about it?",
 	"201010711_108": "Of course we should! \\n They'll definitely be super surprised!",
-	"201010711_109": "Yeah, they will. \\n Then I wonder what would happen after that...",
-	"201010711_110": "I'm looking forward to it. I hope they get home soon..."
+	"201010711_109": "Yeah they will! \\n I wonder how they would react after that...",
+	"201010711_110": "I can't wait to find out. I hope they get home soon..."
 }